Sunday, August 29, 2010

Common Test Results


Best scores
15/16
- Josephine Khoo ; Joey Ling

14/16 - Eng Xue Qi; Jermaine Tan; Yvonne Koh 

13/16 - Marcus Keh; Ong Yi Hong; Seah Wei Lit; Koh Wei Ru; Emillio; Chow Yu Xiang; Aw Jia Teng
Chan Rui Wen; Toh Ying En

Saturday, August 28, 2010

Chapter 3: Singapore healthcare system - For those who are speeding ahead.....

We will be covering the Singapore Healthcare System in Term 4. Good to read ahead. Watch this video and see if you can uncover the 2 points of views about the Singapore healthcare system and list down what are the points for both sides of the argument.

Also write down in point form how the Singapore healthcare system works - see if you can identify two factors discussed as to how Singapore Government makes healthcare affordable.

Common Test - Feedback and results

Feedback  Q1. SBQ- Compare and Contrast
Comments 
1. Similarity or difference in purpose was attempted but the correct structure was not followed.
2. About 3 pupils did not use the connecting words "however" for difference and "similarly" for similarity.
3. Some of you lost marks because your explanation of the evidence was incomplete.
4. A number of you forgot ( maybe about 8 pupils) to add in a Basis of Comparison ( BOC) before doing your comparison. I am glad to say the majority did so which is very good.
5. Some of you did not complete your answer due to the lack of time. 

NB: More comments will be posted together with sample answers

Q2. SEQ on Impact of a declining population
Comments
1. Spelling
Extent NOT Extend

2. Factor 1: Inability to attract MNCs.
Areas for improvement
Key phrases for good explanation
Lack of manpower/Insufficient younger qualified workers to fill positions
Unable to carry out or continue business operations

Majority could explain that:
MNCs would not remain or come to Singapore
Singaporeans would not have enough jobs and lose their jobs
unemployment will rise
loss of income
Singaporeans will become poor
quality if life negatively affected
economy declines

NB: While the question asked about "attracting MNCs" and some of you focused on MNCs leaving Singapore, I accepted the explanations if they were full and complete because "attracting MNCs" includes retaining those MNCs who are already in Singapore. However, it is always good to give an answer that directly addresses the issue which is this case is "attracting MNCs" = getting new MNCs to set up business operations in Singapore.

Overall grade given for the 10 of you who attempted this question was 5 marks for the Given factor. One of you only got 4 marks because there were missing explanation points.

3,. Begin new paragraph with the phrase
" Another impact of a declining population is.........[ factor ]..."

4. Factor 2 - Ageing population
Key phrases needed to score:
National level impact
Less taxes collected since fewer working people
Less funds/resources available by government to meet citizens' needs in other areas like education, housing and defence.
For example - less money for education, quality of education decreases for young Singaporeans - Singaporeans become less likely to be hired for a job - loss of income - Singapore become uncompetitive

NB: Just because the population falls, it may not always mean that the government will increase the tax rate to collect more tax per person to make up the fall in taxes though this could be done.
Family level impact
Financial strain on working people as there are fewer economically productive people supporter a larger group of dependent elderly people.

Best Results for Q2 SEQ - Impact of Declining population
15 Rebecca Lim 9/10
10 Koh Wei Ru 10/10
26 Emillio 10/10


Most frequently achieved grade was 8/10

Q3. SEQ - measures to increase the population

Comments
1. Most of you gave a definition for pro-family measures and stated before explaining the examples such as "extended maternity leave" that these were forms of pro-family measures. [ Excellent!!]

2. However, about 8 pupils did not properly define pro-family measures and a smaller handful also did not use the words "For example" or "such as" before introducing examples of pro-family measures. You need to do this to make sure that your factor is clearly about pro-family measures and not just a mixed-bag of examples.

Best scores for this question:
Perfect scores 10/10
Jermaine Tan 10/10
Foo Jia Yuan 10/10
Joey Ling 10/10
Josephine Khoo 10/10

9/10
Yvonne Koh 9/10
Chloe Chee 9/10
Chua Boon Kuan 9/10
Nixon Sng 9/10
Indira 9/10
Aw Jia Teng 9/10
Lim Chong Wee 9/10
Ong Yan Ting 9/10
Tan Li Xue 9/10
Vivien Oon 9/10
Hillary Wong 9/10
Toh Ying En 9/10
Eng Xue Qi 9/10

Friday, August 27, 2010

TV Programme and Live streaming Alert - Prime Minister's National Day Rally Speech 2010 - Watch it LIVE at 8pm this Sunday 29 Aug

Watch the National Day Rally speech by Prime Minister Lee Hsien Loong.

Broadcast Time is 8pm 29th August(This Sunday!) in English


For live streaming click here: http://www.reach.gov.sg/Microsite/NationalDayRally2010.aspx
or http://www.pmo.gov.sg/News/PressReleases/National+Day+Rally+2010++Live+in+the+palm+of+your+hand.htm

For TV broadcast, tune in to channel 5 and Channel News Asia at 8pm.Mandarin and Malay speeches start at 645pm

Every year, our Prime Minister gives the National Day Rally Speech. The objectives include sharing with the people the government's plans for the future, the rationale behind their major policies and decisions - both current and future and also to motivate, assure and inspire the citizens of Singapore.

Amongst the topics that may be covered include issues which are relevant to your understanding of Social Studies and current affairs such as:
a) Education system
b) Foreigners working and living in Singapore
c) Healthcare
d) Our economy
e) Creating a united Singapore

Homework 7: Impact of an ageing population


Deadline: 5pm Sunday.



Do you best.


We went through the impact of a declining population in class. However, when a population ages, there are also negative consequences[Impacts] on Singapore.
Word of advice : Make sure you answer the question and show how each factor leads to a serious consequnce - has a negative impact on Singapore in some way. The negative nature of the outcome must be explained properly. Think....

Work in your pairs to draft a good explanation for this question:


There are 4 serious consequences of an ageing population for Singapore:
(a) Loss of competitiveness by Singapore.
(b) A weakened defence force
(c) Strain on the working population
(d) Increased demand for healthcare and nursing care for the elderly.


Explain how each of these factors about can impact Singapore in a negative manner.


Weigh all the factors and by defining the term "serious", explain also which is the most serious consequence of all and why.

Structure of answer:
Stand + definition of "serious" in the context of the question.

4 paragraphs - 1 paragraph per factor to show how each factor is a serious consequence of an ageing population.

AND

1 weighing paragraph

Monday, August 23, 2010

Essay 2: Population Policy - Impact of Population Policy

"The most serious impact of the population decline is a weakened defence force." How far do you agree? Explain.

Definition of weighing phrase - serious impact = damaging to Singapore's survival and future.


Factor 3: Serious impact 3 that affects Singapore's survival and future
An ageing population -->A population where the proportion of elderly people is greater than young people--> In Singapore there are increasingly more elderly people-->fewer young people below 65 years who are economically productive--> There are fewer younger people supporting the older economically unproductive people in each family and across the nation.
In each family-->there are fewer children looking after 2 elderly parents. E.g. in a 1 child family, that 1 child must support 2 elderly parents --> Financial strain on the younger person as he has to care for the financial, medical and other needs of his parents who may be dependent on him/her.
At the national level, with fewer younger people--> government collects lesser and lesser tax such as income tax since there are fewer and fewer young people who are employed--> the elderly and mostly retired and do not pay income tax anymore --> since less tax is collected--> govt. has less money to spend on national needs like defence, education and healthcare --> the quality of these public services will fall--> overall quality of life in Singapore will deteriorate --> Singapore will become a backward nation.

Notes on Population policy

Factor 1
Baby Bonus scheme
  • The baby bonus scheme was enhanced in 2004 to provide cash handouts from the government for the 1st to the 4th child totaling $18,000 AND
  • Dollar for dollar financing into each child’s CDA(Child Development Account) account up to $30,000.
  • Baby Bonus scheme encourages couples to have more children because the money given by the govt. can help defray the cost of raising a child by buying items like diapers and milk powder.
  • The CDA account money can also be used to pay for school fees and medical care for the child. The makes the cost of raising more children possible and bearable for more couples and so they may have more children as a result.
  • In Singapore the cost of living can be high and raising a child can be expensive.
  • But withe the baby bonus, families will have more finances to raise children and so Singaporean parents might want to have more children.
Factor 2
Pro-family measures are government policies to support family life and which give families more time and resources to raise their children. One such pro-family measure is:
a) The 5-day work week where members of the civil service work from Monday to Friday with Sat and Sun off.
  • Couples are motivated to have more children because they now have more time for the children and to attend to family matters
  • Singaporeans may feel that with more free time available to care for children, they may feel motivated to have more children.
  • With the 5 day work week, couples now have the entire weekend to be with their children to give them quality parent-child time.
  • Hence, couples may feel motivated to have more children.

b) Another pro-family measure the extended maternity leave.
  • This may encourage more women to have children as mothers now have additional time to spend with their children immediately after child-birth during the crucial first few months.
  • Mothers will feel it is feasible to have more children since they can spend more time after birth.
  • The mothers will also have enough time to recover from the strain of giving birth. Hence, parents may be prepared to have more children to increase Singapore’s population.
c) Another pro-family measure is equalized medical benefits
  • which mean both parents can use their employer’s insurance coverage to pay for their children’s medical bills. 
  • This would help reduce the financial burden of children’s’ medical bills since both parents can now use their employer’s medical insurance for their children’s medical bills. 
  • Hence, this would motivate parents to have more children since the cost of bringing up children is more manageable now.
d) Another pro-family measure is the $3000 tax relief for families whose grandparents lives with them.
  • The parents would be able to pay less in income tax because of the tax relief of $3000 if the family stays with their grandparents. 
  • With grandparents living with them, parents may feel that they do not mind having more children as there are people around whom they trust to take care of their children. 
  • Hence, with more hands helping out, more parents will be encouraged to have more children.
  • However, the tax incentive of $3000 does not lead to much tax savings for most Singaporeans and is not much of a motivation or reason to have more children. 

Factor 3
Attracting foreigners to Singapore
  • Another way to boost the population is by liberalising the immigration law and allowing more foreigners work and live in Singapore by offering foreigners subsidized housing. jobs and attractive education package for their children.
  • This can increase the population quickly because some of these foreigners may find the Singapore environment suitable for them as it is pollution free with good infrastructure and there is harmony. Some may like the quality of life here and stay on. 
  • Some may marry Singaporeans, have a family here and become rooted to Singapore.
  • Some may behave and feel like Singaporeans by adopting our cultural traits like the way we speak, how we dress, what we eat. This sense of connection to Singapore could eventually be so strong that they make them become Singaporeans and want to stay in Singapore for life.
  • This can be an effective way to increase our population because we can easily attract many foreigners to work and live here especially given Singapore’s international standing as Asia’s most liveable city based on the 2010 Economist Intelligence Unit survey. 
  • Hence, with liberal immigration policies, many foreigners may choose to become Singaporeans and this makes the attracting of foreigners to Singapore an effective way to boost the population.

    Sunday, August 22, 2010

    Homework 6: Complere LMS assignment for compare and contrast

    Please complete your LMS assignment for compare and contrast by this week when we meet for lesson.

    This is worth 20% of your final grade.

    Singapore most desired by migrants: Gallup poll - Population Policy

    Sunday Times
    Singapore 22nd August 2010


    The city-state could see its population triple if everyone who wants to move here was allowed to.

    WASHINGTON (AFP) - Singapore remained a top immigration hot spot for the second successive year in a global survey conducted by Gallup.

    The city-state could see its population triple if everyone who wants to move here was allowed to, the poll released last Friday showed.It found that, in that case, Singapore's population of 4.8 million would increase by 219 per cent.

    The second-most popular destination was New Zealand, whose population of four million would rise by 184 per cent. Third was Saudi Arabia, whose population of 26 million would soar by 176 per cent if everyone who wants to come in and wants to leave, could do so.

    Gallup researchers interviewed nearly 350,000 adults in 148 countries between 2007 and this year to calculate each country's Potential Net Migration Index (PNMI).

    The PNMI is the estimated number of adults who wish to permanently leave a country subtracted from the estimated number who wish to immigrate there, as a proportion of the total adult population.

    Singapore also topped a similar survey released in November last year, but with a higher index figure of 260 per cent. Second and third positions were reversed, with Saudi Arabia second and New Zealand third in last year's index.

    The preferred destination of most would-be migrants is still the United States, although the already large US population of 300 million inhabitants means that the impact is less acutely felt, Gallup said.

    The US is No. 14 on the net migration list, which means that if everyone who wanted to could enter the country, and all those who wished to leave did, its population would rise by about 60 per cent.

    For the first time, Switzerland made it onto the list, which was first compiled last year.

    Some 800,000 of the country's six million citizens said they would like to leave permanently, while some 10 million foreigners said they would move there, given the chance.

    At the opposite end of the scale, the populations of Sierra Leone, Haiti and Zimbabwe would fall by more than half if migrants were allowed to leave at will.

    Many countries in Africa and Latin America showed net outflows of population - although four African countries would gain residents, according to the poll.

    They are Botswana, which would see its population increase by 39 per cent, South Africa, Zambia and Namibia, which would see rises of 13 per cent, 5 per cent and 2 per cent respectively.

    Botswana, which ranked just after the US and just above Norway on the list, is the world's top producer of diamonds and a leading destination for high-end tourism. It prides itself as a model of successful democracy in Africa.

    At rock-bottom on the Gallup list is Sierra Leone, the west African country still struggling to recover from a 10-year civil war which ended in 2002.

    If everyone who wanted to leave Sierra Leone could, and everyone who wanted to move there did, its population would plunge by 56 per cent.

    Haiti, the poorest country in the Americas, would lose 51 per cent of its population.

    'While Gallup's findings reflect people's wishes rather than their intentions, the implications of what could happen if these desires become reality are serious considerations for leaders as they plan for the future,' said the organisation.

    The lowest-ranked European Union member state on the list is Latvia, which would lose around a quarter of its population of 2.3 million if migrants were allowed to come in and go out as they wished.

    Homework 6: Post weighing paragraph for population policy here

    Post your weighing paragraph here for the following question:

    "The most effective way to increase the population in Singapore is by attracting foreign talent." How far do you agree? Explain.

    Tuesday, August 17, 2010

    Common Test - Next week - What will I be tested on?

    The paper will be 16 marks.

    (A) SEQ. [10 marks]
    2 options choose 1:
    Q1. Effectiveness of methods to boost the population
    Q2. Impact of a declining population

    (B) SBQ [Compare and contrast - 6 marks]

    Sunday, August 15, 2010

    Population Policy - How can we increase the Singapore population? Video

    Homework 5: Marsiling Sec SBQ Compare and Contrast question

    Please complete the SBQ question for Compare and Contrast for Marsiling Sec from your PINK workbook.

    Pupils with valid reasons for Sat's absence please complete the Q1c from the Tanglin Sec Paper from your PINK workbook.

    Test Results - Traffic Flow Management SEQ


    All essays have been graded.

    The following 2 pupils achieved a perfect score of 12/12
    1. KHOO LI TING JOESEPHINE
    2. KOH YI FANG YVONNE

    11/12
    3. WONG TSE QI HILLARY
    4. MUHAMMAD HAIQAL

    Areas for improvement
    1. Explanation of Park and Ride and how it reduces traffic flow could be better in some cases. Those of you who scored 6/12 marks were those got the 2 other factors explained well but did not explain the given factor of Park and Ride well. This was the part of the explanation for park and ride which these pupils could have written:

    Answer: As these drivers take public transport such as the MRT or buses into the CDB, the roads leading to and from the CBD will be less congested. Public transport like MRT trains and buses take up less or even no space or roads as compared to the large amount of road space that is taken up by the number of cars needed to transport an equivalent number of people into and out of the CDB.

    Note: The comparison of the space on the roads taken up by public transport vs the number of cars that would be needed to ferry the same number of people had to be made clear. It is not just that public transport can transport more people than a single car.

    On the other hand, some of you made very good explanations and were credited for it.

    2. A number of pupils for the Park and Ride essay, discussed the historical impact of park and ride and that in was initially unsuccessful and thus used this to explain that it was ineffective. I accepted this answer as an explanation BUT you needed to also explain how Park and Ride works today and how it is now quite well accepted by the public and thus how it helps to effectively manage traffic flow problems in and around the CBD.
    3. Some of you are still not defining the weighing word "effective" and ended up being unable to make your arguement clear. Room for improvement for these pupils.
    4. For the explanation for VQS, pupils who did not score on this factor were unclear about how VQS works. essentially VQS has 4 parts:
    - COE issuing and hence the ability to control COE issuing
    - Scrapping of cars after 10 years - this also reduces car population and controls its growth
    - bidding and costly nature of COEs - deters potential drivers from buying a car or owning too many cars since COEs add to the cost of owning a car.
    - By limiting the number of COEs and issuing fewer COEs than cars scrapped, the government can directly reduce the car population at will if there was a need to do so, thereby effectively reducing car population throughout Singapore and hence cutting down on congestion.

    Again, some of you did very well in your explanation.

    Friday, August 6, 2010

    Monday, August 2, 2010

    Homework 3:SEQ The best way to increase the population in Singapore

    Deadline is by SUNDAY 5pm 8th August. Do it properly.

    Work individually to write out the answers to this question.
    "The most effective measure in ensuring population growth is by attracting foriegners to Singapore." How far do you agree? Explain your answer. [13 marks]


    Definition of effective measure:
    You may define effective as - the method that can guarantee results in terms of increasing the population OR as the method that can increase the population most quickly OR the method that can lead to a permenant increase in the population.

    Answer in the form of an SEQ. You would need to:
    1. Give a stand
    2. Write 3 body paragraphs:
    - Explain given factor
    - Explain 2 other factors
    3. Write a weighing paragraph

    Sunday, August 1, 2010

    SEQ writing techniques IV - The stand MUST match the weighing word

    The stand of the essay depends on the weighing paragraph.

    Example 1:
    The most effective way to manage traffic flow is through ERP. How far do you agree? Explain.

    NB: We know that ERP is NOT the most effective way. Hence we agree with this statement to only " a small extent.".

    Example 2:
    The most effective way to manage traffic flow is through VQS. How far do you agree? Explain.
    NB: Since we know that VQS is the most effective way, we will agree with this statement to " a large extent."

    Learning point: The stand is linked to the weighing paragraph AND you must already decide beforehand what is your peferred factor.

    SEQ writing techniques III - How the weighing paragraph looks like

    2 key things in weighing:
    1. The choice of preferred factor MUST match the stand. Hence, you need to pre-decide your factor beforehand. You need to study and prepare!

    2. The weighing paragraph consists of:
    a. Defining the weighing word
    b. Explain how the chosen factor meets the defiition
    c. Explain how the other 2 factors are less able to meet the definition.

    Model answer for traffic flow essay weighing paragraph:
    In conclusion, the most effective method of mangaing traffic flow is the method that has the widest impact by controlling traffic flow throughout Singapore and at any time of the day. The VQS will be able too directly control the number of vehicles on the road by issuing fewer COEs than cars scrapped. By doing this over a few months, the overall car population will decrease and all roads will be free from jams. This will cut down the number of vehicles on all Singapore roads and therefore reduce traffic congestion across Singapore at any one time. However, ERP and Park and Ride can only control traffic at the CBD area and has no impact on traffic flow outside of the CBD area. The ERP system is also operational at only some times and thus it has no impact on taffic flow outside of these times. Hence, the method that can control traffic on all road and at all times would be the VQS.