Showing posts with label Stand. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Stand. Show all posts

Sunday, August 1, 2010

SEQ writing techniques IV - The stand MUST match the weighing word

The stand of the essay depends on the weighing paragraph.

Example 1:
The most effective way to manage traffic flow is through ERP. How far do you agree? Explain.

NB: We know that ERP is NOT the most effective way. Hence we agree with this statement to only " a small extent.".

Example 2:
The most effective way to manage traffic flow is through VQS. How far do you agree? Explain.
NB: Since we know that VQS is the most effective way, we will agree with this statement to " a large extent."

Learning point: The stand is linked to the weighing paragraph AND you must already decide beforehand what is your peferred factor.

Wednesday, July 28, 2010

SEQ writing techniques II - The link between the stand & the weighing paragraph

The stand must agree with the weighing paragraph which is linked to the question asked and the given factor.
Confused? Don't be!

Here is what can be done:

Take this everyday example:
100 Plus is the best canned drink. How far do you agree? Explain.

Step 1: Define "best"
Step 2: Use that definition to decide which is the "best" drink.
Step 3: If you believe the given factor is the "best" drink - your stand will be:
I agree with the statement to a large extent.
If you feel that the given factor is NOT the "best" drink - your stand will be:
I agree with the statement to a small extent.

Step 4: Write 3 paragraphs - Explaining why the given drink and 2 other drinks are good drinks.
Step 5: Write the weighing paragraph which must explain why the drink you have chosen to be the "best" drink is the best based on the criterion you have set for the comparison and why the other 2 drinks based on the criterion are not as good.

NB: Your criterion for comparison could be:
1. Nutrition level
2. Replenishes energy faster
3. Not too sweet